1) Headline: Berry lowers merit scholarship standards
Problem: Misleading to article and situation.
Solution: Added “renewal”. Berry lowers merit scholarship standards.
Source: Campus Carrier, via Viking Fusion News.
Problem: Too wordy and confusing.
Solution: Remove excess wordage. Berry just misses 3-point record.
Source: Viking Fusion Sports.
3) Headline:Hearts for Haiti
Problem: Unclear what the post is about.
Solution: Should add the event type, concert. Hearts for Haiti Concert.
Source: Viking Fusion Arts & Culture
Source: CNN US News
Source: Boba Fett Fan Club
“Of the 49 posts this last year, here is a selection of favorite subjects covered on this blog.
- Tonight: Boba Fett on TV, Chat with Daniel Logan
- Fett Saves Colbert
- Robot Chicken Star Wars III Flirts with Fett
- These Aren’t the Mandalorians We’re Looking For
- Celebration V: Fett Always Hit with Artists
- Mail-Away Boba Fett Returns in 2010
- VladislausDantes’ Steampunk Fett
- Run Like an Intergalactic Bounty Hunter
- George Lucas: “I want to do a Boba Fett story”
- Celebration V: Exclusive Interview with Jeremy Bulloch
What would you like to see more now in 2011?”
Should link to each article and count down from 10 to 1 most popular, so #1 is the last.
(6) China stops import of contaminated chicken from America.
(8) China ceases contaminated American chicken imports.
(6:8) China no longer importing American chicken: Bacteria and chemicals in shipments found by inspectors.